Free Intro: Create a Plot Clinic

I found a nice little freebie from Holly Lisle. Her Think Sideways course is a bit pricey, although I can say from personal experience it’s worth every penny. Still, for those of you on a budget, she has a number of writing clinics, which I’ve mentioned before.
For those of you on a tight budget, I found a free intro to her Create a Plot Clinic:
Click Here To Download

I’ve bought and used the entire clinic and it is fantastic. It takes you through the ins and outs of plotting a novel no matter where you are in the process. She gives a number of techniques and gives lots of examples. Anyway, hope you find it helpful.

Links: from Funny to Informative

As I was catching up after the fourth of July weekend, I stumbled across some new writing-related sites:

Many of you have heard of National Novel Writing Month in November (NaNoWriMo), but what about the other 11 months of the year? (Yes, I’m aware of NaNoFiMo and NaPlWriMo, but still…)

If you need motivation, you may like The 500 Word-A-Day Challenge. Easier, more achievable goals is the key. (I won’t be posting their banner yet, since I’m done with my first draft and won’t actually be getting word counts this month. But for the record, I was averaging about 630 WPD. )

There’s a cute comic called Will Write For Chocolate that has some great writer humor. It makes my day.

I found a great article by Margaret Fisk. (It’s actually a free workshop, since she gives an assignment.) It’s called All the Way to the End. She addresses a common problem for writers : not knowing how to end your story.

And finally, Chip MacGregor’s blog had two informative posts: Basic, Basic, Basic Questions and More on the Basic Basics. In the first, he explains a few terms used in the publishing world. The second is more about querying and agents.

First Draft Done!

I finished my first draft which, as I suspected, came up short at 37,800 words. The planned add-in chapters are gonna make it so much deeper. Lots of goodies–conflict, character, and of course more romance between Rachel and Nathan.

I’ll take a short break (as long as I can anyway) and then add in those chapters and scenes. Then I’ll take a week off followed by a hard edit. That should be fun to track. :/

A Much Better Villain

I made up all my lost words yesterday, and though I’m a day behind schedule, I must say I’m very pleased. The conflict is much tighter and my villain’s motivation is much clearer.

This guy is more sympathetic, and yet more abominable than he could have been if I had done it the way I had planned. There’s a lot more tension, too.

Rachel’s doing some crazy stuff to protect the people she loves, which will help me with my ending. Her main concern is Nathan at this point, but we’ve seen that she cares deeply for her mother’s safety (and her mom’s boyfriend) as well. She’s not always acting logically, but she’s acting valiantly and is learning from her mistakes.

This is very exciting. I can’t wait to see the finished product!

Side Note: I once asked ‘What makes a Villain a Villain?’. My favorite answer came from Raquelle who said: “the best villain is one who convinces others that he is no villain at all.”

Pay Attention to ALL Your Characters

I just deleted over 2,000 words. Why would I do this when I’m having trouble getting enough words as it is? Because I messed up. Big time.

You see, when I get started writing, I just go with it. I get in the head of my POV character and I fly. It usually works out. I know the general direction the story needs to take and I have a (albeit vague) idea of what I want to accomplish in each scene (in my defense, I go back and make the scene tighter). My muse likes freedom and when I give it to her, I’m usually rewarded with some neat twists that I hadn’t been expecting.

But there are some minuses. Aside from the aforementioned wandering that I sometimes catch myself doing, I don’t frequently get in the heads of my other characters. I figure out each character at the beginning–discover their motives, needs, personality–but rarely do I stop and think, “How wil so-in-so react to this?”

And today it cost me 2,000 words and about 2 hours of writing and planning. Maybe more. Chapter 12 has been demolished and I’m having to start from ground zero. All because I didn’t use my villain to his full potential. He was being way too nice, only attacking when convenient and never really threatening anyone, just trying to be scary.

Now, he has an army waiting outside my heroine’s home, ready to attack her mom as soon as she steps over the protective threshold of her home. And she won’t even see it coming.

For a brief synopsis, see my earlier post: My Current Project

A Problem and a Challenging Solution

Okay, so I’ve got an interesting problem to deal with. I’m almost done with my first draft. I’ve got two very short scenes, one really long scene (the final battle!) and then another quick one to wrap it up. Only problem is, this was supposed to be a 60,000-word novel and I’m only at 32k!

A little tip for other writers: filler is bad. I don’t want to use filler.

So what do I do?

Fortunately, I’ve already planned to go back and insert entire chapters from Nathan (my hero’s) point of view. This will add depth to my love story, a new voice, maybe a little history (because he is a ghost after all), and we can see the heroine from another perspective.

(I expect the unexpected to happen when I do this. My muse likes the throw some cool stuff on the page when I do stuff like this. )

And then I’ll add a romance for poor Lisa, who has desperately wanted a boyfriend since chapter 1.

I’ll also rewrite some of my current scenes from his perspective and see which is better. Then, I’ll go back to the beginning and add rich detail, a LOT more conflict (I’ve decided life’s been way too easy for Rachel), and a ton of showing (vs. telling).

I should get my words in, but this is going to take a lot of planning.

First of all, when I finish the first draft I’m taking a break! Maybe two weeks. I’ll work on my phantom project, maybe catch up on my reading, stuff like that. Then I’ll go through what I have and write out what I’m hoping to get out of each scene. What do I want to tell the reader? How do I show it instead? What’s the conflict? What could make it worse? How would EACH character (present or not) react? What are my characters seeing, feeling, hearing, smelling, tasting, thinking, doing, and saying? What do they want to hide from the other characters? What other motivation might they have?
etc…

Yeah, it’s a long process, but the product that comes from it is more than worth it!
Then, I read through a hard copy of my book, writing in comments, suggestions, thoughts, and nit-picky edits. THEN I go through a soft copy and actually MAKE all those edits. (By now I’ll be exhausted.)

I’d like to get all of this done by October 1st. (I know, good luck, right?) That way I’ll have a full month to plan my phantom project in time for NaNoWriMo.

Think I can do it?

We’ll see.

By the way, the Writing Tip of the Day is:
Never resist editing, because your writing isn’t etched in stone and can always be improved for the reader.

How appropriate.

Another Crash Test!

Another one of my segments made it as a Writer’s Crash Test. Here’s a link in case you missed the first one. Helpful stuff, though I really got an ear full from other followers about my character’s methods.

Holly Lisle and the Case of the Subtle Secret

Helpful Writing Software

Okay, I have scoured the internet and I think I have a pretty good list of helpful software for writers. A special thanks to Sue on the How to Think Sideways message boards. She posted a majority of these linkson our writer’s forum. (How Think Sideways has helped me.)

First, the free stuff:

AbiWord
Bubbl.us web-based mind-mapping software. Good for brainstorming.
Google Notebook – a simple, but effective processor that you can access online and export onto any computer.
Dark Room: much like the mac’s White Room, this is a simple processor that eliminates distractions.
Evernote – take a picture of something on your iPhone or Blackberry and sync it with your computer and the web. Pretty cool software.
Journler – journal and organizer (includes audio and video capabilities) (for Mac)

Langmaker – helps with language building (only works on Windows XP or under.)
Lotus Symphony: a word processor, spreadsheet and presentation application.
Page Four – a simple but intuitive word processor. It’s like Word, but for writers. Nice little tools and other additions make this worth a look. In my opinion, this is the best out of the free stuff.(for the full version: $34.95, but the free version includes a lot.)
PlotCraft
Q10 – saves in a plain text format and comes with a timer. (Windows only)
Rough Draft
Scripped and Zhura - for script writing (This is a link to a blog that talks about it.)

Storybase Online
Write Sparks ($0 – $77)
Write This
yWriter 4
Writer’s Café - has multiple tools including plotcards that you can move around. Great organizational tool. Works on Linux, too. ($45.00 for full version)
Writertopia – has Work in Progress meters you can use for blogs and other websites so others can follow your progress (see my widget).

Microsoft Office Suite has a program called OneNote. It isn’t free, but you may find that you already have it on your computer. It’s quite nice. You can get a 60 day free trial here, or if you’re a student or teacher, you can get it at a discount here.
MacJournal may be on your computer right now, if you’re a Mac user.

Now the less-than-free-but-good products:

Book Writer 5.01 ($89.95)
Dramatica Pro ($244.00)
Dramatica Writers DreamKit ($49.95)
IdeaWeaver ($49.95)
Jarte Plus ($19.00)
Liquid Story Binder XE – best creative writing software on the market (for Windows). See my post about it here. ($49.95)
New Novelist ($54.99)
Novel Writer ($61.00)
Power Structure ($179.00)
Power Writer ($129.95)

Story Wizard ($54.99)
Storybase Software ($99.00)
StoryView ($179.95)
StoryWeaver ($29.95)
SuperNoteCard ($29.00)
Text Block Author ($49.97)
Typing Chimp’s Character Pro ($69.99)
Typing Chimp’s Character Writer 2 ($39.99)
Typing Chimp’s QuickStory ($49.99)
WriteItNow ($49.95)
Writers Blocks – great for note card plotting, among other things ($149.00)
WriteWay ($79.00)

And of course, Holly has tons of excellent classes, workshops and clinics! See my review of those here.

Liquid Story Binder Software Discount

I found out through the Think Sideways forum that Liquid Story Binder is going on sale! Liquid Story Binder Software at 50% Discount will make the difference for me. The discount is only available on Tuesday, though. Otherwise, it’s full price at $45-$55.
Liquid Story Binder is software for writers. It’s like Scrivener, but can be used on Windows. It has it all–planning tools, story boards, timelines, images, character creating, journals, goal-setting… the list goes on. I decided to download a 30 free trial to see if I liked it. I’d heard it wasn’t intuitive, but had everything you could possibly want in writing software. The people I talked to said you just need to get started and you’ll discover new tools as you find a need for them.
I did take advantage of the journal. I wrote down some things as I explored:

I’m doodling around, trying to understand LSB. It’s complicated, and not exactly intuitive. I don’t like the color scheme but– wait! I read somewhere that you can change it! Score!
Most of the things I don’t like are minor. I can deal with it. But yeah, it’s definitely not intuitive. I hate having to click on everything, although I’ll bet there are shortcut keys. I was told this would take some getting used to. I can’t expect to understand everything the first day.
I still don’t know if I want to move Shadows to LSB, or just start with planning Phantom. Hmmm… Not sure.
It’s hard to plan out something that’s already planned, but I’ll need to edit. It beats writing it all out on note cards. That would be silly, come to think of it. I’ll probably just start with my second draft.
Yeah.

I just I just discovered the typewriter feature. It’s a full screen mode that doesn’t let you erase. This is a great way to do free association! My problem is that my right-brain feels more free when I type, but my left-brain likes to edit and censor.

Okay, I changed the template. Most of the color scheme choices are awful! They’re bright and gaudy and would hurt my eyes if I started at them for too long. The only decent options were Pale Horse, Baltic Sea, and Faded Pastel. I wound up creating my own color scheme which I appropriately titled ‘Rose’. I’m very pleased. It makes me want to write.

So there you have it, my first hour on Liquid Story Binder. I also like that it times your sessions and keeps an automatic word count so you can see how long it takes you to write a thousand words, or meet your goal, or how much time you waste.

If you decide purchasing software is not for you, I’ll post a list of free software options sometime. But I’ve tried a bunch and none of them (with the exception of Scrivener) has as many useful features in one place.

A Helpful Loss

Well, I didn’t win Query Tracker’s Elevator Pitch Contest, which is a disappointment BUT I did notice something that may help me. One of the winners wote a pitch for a YA novel about a girl who has a crush on a ghost! It’s so similar to mine that I don’t feel quite so bad.

I looked at the pitch itself to try to figure out why it had won rather than mine. The thing that hit me the most was the voice. This author, though she used only one or two sentences, sounded like a teenager.

I never realized it before, but I think my word choice and tone are a little mature for Young Adult. My main character in Shadows is pretty mature for a high school senior, come to think of it. I always told myself that she’d have to be if she were facing the things I’m throwing at her!

Still, I may be hurting myself. I think this is something I need to work on.